i need a pair of cheap sun/suntan buckle tap shoes around size 7.
where can i find them at.
i looked on ebay but i didnt see a lot with my size.
please helppppp!!!
I needddd heeelppp?
well i own a pair of bloch tap shoes and they are wonderful! if your dance studio has a store in it see if they sell your type of shoes or if their is a dance store around you like i have. if not just ask your dance teacher wear to get them. Definitley do not het them at payless.
Reply:you can go to payless shoe store they have it over there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reply:haha same thing im wonderin about
i really dont know
and i need need need to know
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good luck with that hahah!
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Reply:Dont go to payless for sure.. they%26#039;re like fake tap shoes practically...just type in BLOCH shoes on google..thats what i have
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Wednesday, April 15, 2009
I have just finished a poem. please may i have your opinions? easy points. best answer to constructive critics
Daisy, across the Broadway path
The girl with fame
In place of a heart
Singing out those small-town blues
Tied down to the past,
By buckle-up shoes
She would watch her stars
Each day and night
The walk of fame, her paradise
As the sun went down,
She lost disguise, un-zipped her top
Spread out her thighs
A snort of crack, a quick shoot up
Bubbles gone, she’s back on top
Time to grace her stage again
Oh, such a glamorous way
To pay the bills, greasy poles
And one night thrills
She dreamt of meeting Spielberg
To stand up with Monroe
Yet all she earned was money
From those in the front row
She always wanted to be a star,
She was my star
She’s fallen now.
please bear in mind i am only13
and have missed a year of schooling, so my grammar and patterns may be incorrect.
apologies.
thank you in advance.
I have just finished a poem. please may i have your opinions? easy points. best answer to constructive critics
I see you took my advice and wrote a poem about a girl who becomes a prostitute due to desperation, and I really like the mood you set with this poem, you did an excellant job. At first glance I was not too crazy about it because of the irregular rhyming patterns you used, but then again, I am a rhyming poet myself, free verse is just not me. But on second glance, you were setting the mood of the story, the introduction of a small town girl dreaming of being famous
The part I really liked was stanzas 4-6:
%26quot;As the sun went down,
She lost disguise, un-zipped her top
Spread out her thighs
A snort of crack, a quick shoot up
Bubbles gone, she’s back on top
Time to grace her stage again
Oh, such a glamorous way
To pay the bills, greasy poles
And one night thrills%26quot;
This was when you rhymed the most. This really showed the raw and graphic nature of what happens when a girl falls into desperation looking for fame without sucess, potential, or education- prostitution. You painted a very desperate scene, such as %26quot;spread out thighs%26quot;, %26quot;greasy poles%26quot;, %26quot;one night thrills%26quot;, %26quot;the snort of crack%26quot;, %26quot;unzipped top%26quot; etc.
I find everything else to be good, until the last stanza:
%26quot;She always wanted to be a star,
She was my star
She’s fallen now%26quot;
The description is poetic and profound, but what is the meaning behind it? Of course the narrative was in 3rd person I assume, but the reference to %26quot;She was my star, She’s fallen now%26quot; leaves me confused as to who the narrator is, perhaps a former bf/lover, but how would he have known of all this if she moved to Hollywood? I felt it was confusing.
But overall, I would certainly give this poem a 9 out of 10, because it painted a interesting story that was a tale of dreams and hopes mixed with pain and sorrow. I take one point away for the confusing ending, but overall, it was excellant through and through. Good luck and keep writing.
Reply:Everything up to the last two lines is great. I don%26#039;t see any grammatical problems, and even if they%26#039;re there, poetry doesn%26#039;t have to follow grammatical rules like regular prose; in fact, in most cases it shouldn%26#039;t.
However, your ending lines sound weak; the sentiment expressed is good, but you say it in a way that has become cliche. Try to think of something more original than the fallen star metaphor.
Reply:Hey kiddo. Not bad, but a little bit moralistic, for my taste. I think the ideas are conventional. I%26#039;d rather see a poem about how she still struggles for artistic integrity, even in this terrible situation.
Reply:I must say first off that I hate poetry!!! I think this is a great poem though. You showed your emotion and by the time I got to the end I felt bad for you and her. Great job like I said I hate poetry but you got me with this one so kudos.
Reply:I like the top verses, they have a jaunty rhythm. And I like the cynicism of the third to last verse.
I%26#039;m undecided about the last verse.
Reply:Pretty well for a 13 year old. Personally, prefer the ending of your poem as it rhyms best =).
Reply:It%26#039;s amazing! I sometimes wish I could write like that.
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The girl with fame
In place of a heart
Singing out those small-town blues
Tied down to the past,
By buckle-up shoes
She would watch her stars
Each day and night
The walk of fame, her paradise
As the sun went down,
She lost disguise, un-zipped her top
Spread out her thighs
A snort of crack, a quick shoot up
Bubbles gone, she’s back on top
Time to grace her stage again
Oh, such a glamorous way
To pay the bills, greasy poles
And one night thrills
She dreamt of meeting Spielberg
To stand up with Monroe
Yet all she earned was money
From those in the front row
She always wanted to be a star,
She was my star
She’s fallen now.
please bear in mind i am only13
and have missed a year of schooling, so my grammar and patterns may be incorrect.
apologies.
thank you in advance.
I have just finished a poem. please may i have your opinions? easy points. best answer to constructive critics
I see you took my advice and wrote a poem about a girl who becomes a prostitute due to desperation, and I really like the mood you set with this poem, you did an excellant job. At first glance I was not too crazy about it because of the irregular rhyming patterns you used, but then again, I am a rhyming poet myself, free verse is just not me. But on second glance, you were setting the mood of the story, the introduction of a small town girl dreaming of being famous
The part I really liked was stanzas 4-6:
%26quot;As the sun went down,
She lost disguise, un-zipped her top
Spread out her thighs
A snort of crack, a quick shoot up
Bubbles gone, she’s back on top
Time to grace her stage again
Oh, such a glamorous way
To pay the bills, greasy poles
And one night thrills%26quot;
This was when you rhymed the most. This really showed the raw and graphic nature of what happens when a girl falls into desperation looking for fame without sucess, potential, or education- prostitution. You painted a very desperate scene, such as %26quot;spread out thighs%26quot;, %26quot;greasy poles%26quot;, %26quot;one night thrills%26quot;, %26quot;the snort of crack%26quot;, %26quot;unzipped top%26quot; etc.
I find everything else to be good, until the last stanza:
%26quot;She always wanted to be a star,
She was my star
She’s fallen now%26quot;
The description is poetic and profound, but what is the meaning behind it? Of course the narrative was in 3rd person I assume, but the reference to %26quot;She was my star, She’s fallen now%26quot; leaves me confused as to who the narrator is, perhaps a former bf/lover, but how would he have known of all this if she moved to Hollywood? I felt it was confusing.
But overall, I would certainly give this poem a 9 out of 10, because it painted a interesting story that was a tale of dreams and hopes mixed with pain and sorrow. I take one point away for the confusing ending, but overall, it was excellant through and through. Good luck and keep writing.
Reply:Everything up to the last two lines is great. I don%26#039;t see any grammatical problems, and even if they%26#039;re there, poetry doesn%26#039;t have to follow grammatical rules like regular prose; in fact, in most cases it shouldn%26#039;t.
However, your ending lines sound weak; the sentiment expressed is good, but you say it in a way that has become cliche. Try to think of something more original than the fallen star metaphor.
Reply:Hey kiddo. Not bad, but a little bit moralistic, for my taste. I think the ideas are conventional. I%26#039;d rather see a poem about how she still struggles for artistic integrity, even in this terrible situation.
Reply:I must say first off that I hate poetry!!! I think this is a great poem though. You showed your emotion and by the time I got to the end I felt bad for you and her. Great job like I said I hate poetry but you got me with this one so kudos.
Reply:I like the top verses, they have a jaunty rhythm. And I like the cynicism of the third to last verse.
I%26#039;m undecided about the last verse.
Reply:Pretty well for a 13 year old. Personally, prefer the ending of your poem as it rhyms best =).
Reply:It%26#039;s amazing! I sometimes wish I could write like that.
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Please give me opinions. best answer to those with constructive critisism?
Daisy, across the Broadway path
The girl with fame
In place of a heart
Singing out those small-town blues
Tied down to the past,
By buckle-up shoes
She would watch her stars
Each day and night
The walk of fame, her paradise
As the sun went down,
She lost disguise, un-zipped her top
Spread out her thighs
A snort of crack, a quick shoot up
Bubbles gone, she’s back on top
Time to grace her stage again
Oh, such a glamorous way
To pay the bills, greasy poles
And one night thrills
She dreamt of meeting Spielberg
To stand up with Monroe
Yet all she earned was money
From those in the front row
She always wanted to be a star,
She was my star
She’s fallen now.
please bear in mind i am only13
and have missed a year of schooling, so my grammar and patterns may be incorrect.
apologies.
thank you in advance.
Please give me opinions. best answer to those with constructive critisism?
that is so good!!!
have you considered entering in a contest or something,
I REALLY think you could win :]
keep writing, your talented :]
Reply:I like how your rhymes aren%26#039;t corny.
%26#039;A snort of crack, a quick shoot up
Bubbles gone, she’s back on top
Time to grace her stage again%26#039;
I%26#039;m not sure how much sense this makes.
I%26#039;d make this a little more personal and revalent to you and your life with more emotion.
By any chance, is this poem about either one of the Spears girls?
credot siosse
The girl with fame
In place of a heart
Singing out those small-town blues
Tied down to the past,
By buckle-up shoes
She would watch her stars
Each day and night
The walk of fame, her paradise
As the sun went down,
She lost disguise, un-zipped her top
Spread out her thighs
A snort of crack, a quick shoot up
Bubbles gone, she’s back on top
Time to grace her stage again
Oh, such a glamorous way
To pay the bills, greasy poles
And one night thrills
She dreamt of meeting Spielberg
To stand up with Monroe
Yet all she earned was money
From those in the front row
She always wanted to be a star,
She was my star
She’s fallen now.
please bear in mind i am only13
and have missed a year of schooling, so my grammar and patterns may be incorrect.
apologies.
thank you in advance.
Please give me opinions. best answer to those with constructive critisism?
that is so good!!!
have you considered entering in a contest or something,
I REALLY think you could win :]
keep writing, your talented :]
Reply:I like how your rhymes aren%26#039;t corny.
%26#039;A snort of crack, a quick shoot up
Bubbles gone, she’s back on top
Time to grace her stage again%26#039;
I%26#039;m not sure how much sense this makes.
I%26#039;d make this a little more personal and revalent to you and your life with more emotion.
By any chance, is this poem about either one of the Spears girls?
credot siosse
Please, help me with my poem. urgent, really urgent.?
Daisy, across the Broadway path
The girl with fame
In place of a heart
Singing out her small-town blues
Tied down to the past,
By buckle-up shoes
She saw her stars each day and night
one the walk of fame
DON’T KNOW WHAT TO PUT HERE
then i need a few more verses
to set a scene and give some idea of story
then this will be the last verse:
You always wanted to be a star,
You were my star
You’re fallen now.
please understand that im only 13, so i know it isnt great
i just need to get it as good as i can be
i know what i want to say
just unsure of how to put it across.
thank you in advance.
Please, help me with my poem. urgent, really urgent.?
trying to keep sane
Reply:it great
Reply:this is a really good poem but a hard topic!
%26quot;on the walk of fame
a feeling she long desired
now living the dream
dreamful nights as my precious star
distant, hard to reach in the sky
she stands in her fame
looking down unsatisfied
a dream come true
but a feeling of misery
Always wanting to be a star,
You were my star
You’re fallen now.%26quot;
its really bad and not following witht he story but im trying to help!
Reply:Well, after the %26quot;on walk in the frame%26quot; you should say umm... have you asked your mom!?
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The girl with fame
In place of a heart
Singing out her small-town blues
Tied down to the past,
By buckle-up shoes
She saw her stars each day and night
one the walk of fame
DON’T KNOW WHAT TO PUT HERE
then i need a few more verses
to set a scene and give some idea of story
then this will be the last verse:
You always wanted to be a star,
You were my star
You’re fallen now.
please understand that im only 13, so i know it isnt great
i just need to get it as good as i can be
i know what i want to say
just unsure of how to put it across.
thank you in advance.
Please, help me with my poem. urgent, really urgent.?
trying to keep sane
Reply:it great
Reply:this is a really good poem but a hard topic!
%26quot;on the walk of fame
a feeling she long desired
now living the dream
dreamful nights as my precious star
distant, hard to reach in the sky
she stands in her fame
looking down unsatisfied
a dream come true
but a feeling of misery
Always wanting to be a star,
You were my star
You’re fallen now.%26quot;
its really bad and not following witht he story but im trying to help!
Reply:Well, after the %26quot;on walk in the frame%26quot; you should say umm... have you asked your mom!?
myspace quizzes
What are those slip on shoes called with the buckle and they look like moccosins & they have cork soles?
clogs?
What are those slip on shoes called with the buckle and they look like moccosins %26amp; they have cork soles?
they are called clogs and have been around for a number of years...they can also have wooden soles!
Reply:Burkinstocks
Reply:mary janes!!
Reply:Berikinstocks?
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What are those slip on shoes called with the buckle and they look like moccosins %26amp; they have cork soles?
they are called clogs and have been around for a number of years...they can also have wooden soles!
Reply:Burkinstocks
Reply:mary janes!!
Reply:Berikinstocks?
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Where can I buy Australia size 11, wide, black , professional ,medium heel, shoes/boots for women ?
Size 11 in Australia for womens shoes/boots.
Lace ups, buckles, ankle or calf length. Medium to long heel. Must be black.
Where can I buy Australia size 11, wide, black , professional ,medium heel, shoes/boots for women ?
www.sportshoesbrand.com
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Lace ups, buckles, ankle or calf length. Medium to long heel. Must be black.
Where can I buy Australia size 11, wide, black , professional ,medium heel, shoes/boots for women ?
www.sportshoesbrand.com
visualarts
Where can I get dance shoes that fit all my "terms"?
I dance Latin Ballroom (Rumba, Samba, Cha-cha, Jive, Paso Doble).
My instructor said to buy a pair of sun-tan dance shoes for a competition coming up, because the pair I use right now are black. I already visited BDS in San Jose and Ballroom Connection. Do you know any other store located in the Bay Area that carries any pairs of shoes that follow the following terms?
My terms:
- tan (obviously)
- 2%26quot; heel
- size 7 1/2 or 8
- open-toe
- no buckle on the straps covering the toe (I tried out a shoe with a circular buckle on the toe and it dug into my foot. )
Where can I get dance shoes that fit all my %26quot;terms%26quot;?
Check out:
www.discountdance.com
www.dancedistributors.com
Reply:try discountdance.com or capezio.com.
Good luck!
Reply:I%26#039;m not too familiar with where you live, but I know some great sites where you can get them online.
If you%26#039;re into brand-name shoes:
http://www.allaboutdance.com/s.nl/it.A/i...
They come in Gold and Natural (light brown) but I don%26#039;t know if that%26#039;s what you want. They buckle is on the ankle so I think it should be OK. $67.50
http://www.dance4less.com/ballroom_shoes...
^^ There are a BUNCH here to choose from but I think they are mostly if not all 2.5 inch heels.
Reply:Order your shoes online... cheaper that way, and most fitting guides are really true to size. Just be honest about your shoe size when buying them.
This site has quite a few options. I personally enjoy the Rachel style, for fit, comfort and also affordability. It does come in a tan satin.
http://www.usadanceshoes.com/latin_ballr...
Have a great comp!
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My instructor said to buy a pair of sun-tan dance shoes for a competition coming up, because the pair I use right now are black. I already visited BDS in San Jose and Ballroom Connection. Do you know any other store located in the Bay Area that carries any pairs of shoes that follow the following terms?
My terms:
- tan (obviously)
- 2%26quot; heel
- size 7 1/2 or 8
- open-toe
- no buckle on the straps covering the toe (I tried out a shoe with a circular buckle on the toe and it dug into my foot. )
Where can I get dance shoes that fit all my %26quot;terms%26quot;?
Check out:
www.discountdance.com
www.dancedistributors.com
Reply:try discountdance.com or capezio.com.
Good luck!
Reply:I%26#039;m not too familiar with where you live, but I know some great sites where you can get them online.
If you%26#039;re into brand-name shoes:
http://www.allaboutdance.com/s.nl/it.A/i...
They come in Gold and Natural (light brown) but I don%26#039;t know if that%26#039;s what you want. They buckle is on the ankle so I think it should be OK. $67.50
http://www.dance4less.com/ballroom_shoes...
^^ There are a BUNCH here to choose from but I think they are mostly if not all 2.5 inch heels.
Reply:Order your shoes online... cheaper that way, and most fitting guides are really true to size. Just be honest about your shoe size when buying them.
This site has quite a few options. I personally enjoy the Rachel style, for fit, comfort and also affordability. It does come in a tan satin.
http://www.usadanceshoes.com/latin_ballr...
Have a great comp!
visual arts
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